Oh DEAR! THis is some great stuff! This is Great!
Between the sun and the end of sol
Witch is thee only measurement of the soul
And its experience of love, that makes them whole
A beginning to prase the universes extol
And the unimaginable price of its beauty
So perfect! I don't know if you menat to say 'witch' but I think it's better than 'which'. You wrote a beautiful poem-are you a professional? Because this seems to have some incredible classical underpinnings. If not, you are a natural with more talent than you can imagine.
The Earth is iced, isn't it?