OOC: Maybe when you return to Everest base from your attack. since I was just injured and in ICU for a while I guess that would make sense, but make sure it does take some time, less than a week, but more than a day. Maybe you want even Omega to get involved. I guess it would be like a conspiracy almost Please Register or Log in to view the hidden image!. What do you think?
"Wait for it...... wait for it....... now!" *Foom* *Foom* The sound of mortars unleashing their light barrages filled the air as men charged the village. Jeeps came rolling at high speeds.
Out of Game: Sounds good Please Register or Log in to view the hidden image!, and oh by the way, keep the fact Shogun is a prince a secret, nobody besides the royal family and Omega know about it, I will reveal it later on. My immortality thing will come MUCH later.
OOC: okay In game: "shouldnt they be getting that attack finished soon?"-Zero "Oh come on, give em several hours at least, theyre new in combat it's not like they can take on that regiment you did the other day in an hour or so"-Gunny "54 minutes"- Zero said "Oh stop it with the chicken shit."-Gunny said with a grin ""Stop it with the chicken shit, sir"-Zero said in a patronizing way laughing "Hah, just watch your back....sir"-Zimmerman "Good job Master Gunnery sergant, we might just make a marine out of you yet"-Zero said "Aye aye sir"- Zimmerman said chuckling.
Then the heavy weapons specialists fired the anti-armor missiles at the armored units and the artillery. "Targets eliminated, sir," Shogun smiled and said, "Advance towards them," "Yes sir," Shogun then sent a message to Omega, "We eliminated the enemy rear guard, sir" They then advanced stealthily towards the enemy center.
OOC: ha, you blew up 10 tanks, 3 artillery pieces, annihalated a lot of armored infantry and rear guardsmen, and yet you are able to advance "stealthily" heh hehPlease Register or Log in to view the hidden image!. Sarcastic: "Hey sir, did you notice all of our tanks are on fire?"-holian "No when exactly did that happen?"- a bored holian commander "And there are the soldiers, laying down, is that blood?!?"-holian "Nah, theyre probably trying to play a prank, just ignore them"-commander
Out of Game: Well, when you got awesome stealth systems Please Register or Log in to view the hidden image! and Jet Packs...things change. The strike was also so fast, that nobody had time to react In Game: "Enemy reinforcements," Shogun said. He turned his Geass to combat mode ( analyzing weak points and blind spots .ect ). He took out his rifle and started dropping enemy soldiers.
Omega's jeep drove by some enemys. He opened up with his MG killing five. By now the infantry was arriving. "Keep our troops advancing."
"Set up the cannons 60% right and left of my position," Shogun ordered, "Yes sir," They then moved to the position, setting up the turrets, under the cover fire from the rest of the company. Shogun then clipped a magazine of plasma rounds and set his rifle on assault mode.
you know, you guys could use some literary ommission. It's where you skip over events that arent absolutely necessary and let the reader imagine them. ie. in my battle you literally only saw the very beginning of the battle and the very ending. you didnt see my troops charge the fence, or blow up the towers with RPG's or clear barracks with submachine guns. You only saw the beginning and end and I let the reader imagine the rest. It allows for you to have greater effect on the reader while being more concise.
"Well we should get back inside, Im guessing Shogun and Omega will be getting back soon, it seems from what Ive heard that the battle is winding down"-gunny "Hmm, two and a half hours, well at least we got a good view"-Zero
Out of Game: Well, sometimes it is better to be more descriptive. In Game: "The cannons are up!" one soldier shouted over the comms. Then Shogun gave the order to fire, "Fire at concentrated groups of enemies,"
"Sir, the mop-up job is going well. 21 P.O.Ws have been captured." "Casualties?" "4 KIA, 13 WIA, and 1 MIA." "One missing? That's not good."
OOC: You can remotely self destruct nano soldiers that have been compromised like before when my guy found you and used that chemical to disintigrate/burn your ship. its instantaneous and painless.
The cannons chopped down the groups of enemies, then the snipers and infantry took out the rest. "Targets eliminated, mission complete," Shogun said smiling "Casualties count,"Shogun then ordered "No KIA, 3 WIA, all minor wounds, no MIA," Shogun smiled and said, "You have proven yourselves by keeping my record clean, no KIA, MIA, or permanently wounded under my command," Shogun then asked Omega, "How was your side of the battle,"
