I've read through your site.
I've picked out some points that I find problematic; whereby this choice is not complete:
All quoted passages from
http://virtueknightcode.blogspot.com/
What does it mean to craft a modern way of life? The way of the Virtue Knight must be, first and foremost, ethical. It must embody all of the best things about humanity. It must be a guide for virtuous living. In this way, it becomes useful to the world.
BigBlueHead addressed many problems here and I agree with his viewpoints. I'll only add some other things I find upsetting:
What is ethical? Usually, in practical everyday life, the most ethical is to break the rules that have become too narrow for the current situation. What is ethical cannot be prescribed in advance.
What are the best things about humanity? I am sure valid counterarguments can be found to
anything anyone would venture to answer to this question.
Third, it cannot over step its bounds and infringe on individual personal beliefs. It must not make unwarranted claims to the favor of any one religious model and must instead not tread in this area.
This is impossible.
Even if Virtue Knights would be such people to whom the above applies -- your intent is that Virtue Knights act in a social environment, and in this social environment, there is plenty of people who feel that the Virtue Knight's action has infringed on their beliefs, even though the Virtue Knights may not think so.
Who is to judge then if an act of a Virtue Knight was indeed useful? What good is an act if the recipient of it does not think it useful?
You know, "Superman, thank you for saving me, but did you really have to enter through the wall? Have you any idea how much it will cost to fix that?! Why didn't you enter at the door?"
It must give room for Knights of differing opinions on specific matters of conscience.
In this case, you can forget about the Virtue Knights forming a viable organization.
In a social organization like a tribe, people can have differing opinions, but it still works out for them as they are a tribe not by their own choice.
As soon you have a social organization based on choice, it loses the obligating character of a tribe, and with it, that genuine sense of feeling like a member.
Sixth, it must embody many of the best lessons of philosophy, history, and spiritual traditions, and bring them together into a new holistic understanding with all of these other elements.
Seeing that you use "must" so often, I will spare you with criticism.
You can say "it *must* embody many of the best lessons of philosophy, history, and spiritual traditions, and bring them together into a new holistic understanding with all of these other elements" -- but not that this *can* actually be done.
The Virtue Knight makes it known to the world that he or she is a person who strives for ethical conduct, good citizenship, and who respects and tolerates diversity and democracy - even while having more specific beliefs which they may or may not share with other Virtue Knights. Therefore, the Virtue Knight Code is both ethical, individualist, and pragmatic.
... and out comes
political correctness. Sorry, but it's true.
In all of these instances, human beings are striving for goodness and decency.
But don't forget that what is decency to one, may be indecency to another.
These many gods, rituals, traditions, beliefs, and philosophies are the embodiment of the human struggle for truth, compassion, and goodness. Whether or not a particular tradition is on the proper path toward goodness or true enlightenment can be debated, but the fact is that all human societies attempt to find a path.
This is so general that it is useless.
Through the will of focus, a Virtue Knight takes note of those things which he or she has and what he or she can work with.
He/she. *She* is a Virtue Knight?! A knight, traditionally only a male, with the whole historical apparatus bound to males -- this term is now also to be used for women? In order to masculinize them, or something?
The suggested term may work in English. But your idea is to go cross borders, right? What about languages that know gender in nouns, and in which the word for "knight" is masculine. New words would have to be invented in those languages -- which is easy when it comes to modern, popular words. But take an old traditional word like "knight" -- you can't do much with it anymore. In German, for example, do you propose a female knight is to be "die Ritterin"?
A word, so heavily laden with historic connotation to be something specifically male -- now a word for women? No way.
The Virtue Knight makes an active effort every day to appreciate that which is good while it lasts.
What, are you suggesting that a Virtue Knight is to think in terms of "while it lasts"? This is a perspective the apathic take, people who think they have no control over things, who think that they cannot really influence them.
Not to say we can have full control.
But from a motivational perspective, saying "appreciate that which is good while it lasts" is negative, rendering the person who conceptualizes reality this way rather helpless.
Imagine saying that soccer is a game based on the principle of mistakes. This is not a wrong observation. But motivationally, it is not good to think this way. You try to go and play soccer, always having in your mind "I must not make a mistake, I must watch out for the opponent to make a mistake" -- it will paralyze you!
The same, if you keep telling yourself "appreciate that which is good while it lasts" while watching a sunset, for example, will disable you to enjoy it.
Each of these lines of thought are presented in the order for which most human beings will usually develop understanding. They progress from most primitive to most morally mature or enlightened.
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This is how we would measure the progress of a member of the Virtue Academy. Offering a system of achievement would give members something to strive for and be proud of in their pursuit of ethical excellence. The ranks would also help give structure and organization to the Virtue Knight program.
Are you trying to *plan* ethical development?!
Of yourself, of other people?
As if ethical development is some sort of business?
Do you really believe that virtue can be gained/achieved directly, by nominally striving to gain/achieve that virtue?
Do you really believe that one can become, say, compassionate, by explicity striving for compassion?