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shorty_37

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I made up this little poem, as I went along lol I welcome you to create your own.
Lets see how creative you are.

BTW I used those posters who stand out to me the most, but some of you
I wanted to add had names that were too long or strange......




I found this place and started to post,
Now people say I talk the most.

I feel picked on and I am sad,
And some people here make me mad.

There is a nice guy one_raven,
Does he think I really need savin?

Oli uses big words that are long,
I am surprised he doesn't spell them wrong.

There is a God Lover named Sandy,
But i think it's a dude really named Randy.:eek:

There is a martial arts guy Chi,
But he isn't as honest as Me.

Mountainhare is a real PRICK
He has no morals, and maybe no dick.

Sock Puppet, Zak, Fishtail and Mike,
Who is building a trail for his mountain bike.

DanceandExplode is young at heart
She's cute and nice and kinda smart

Nickelodeon is such a joker,
He must be a midnight toker.:m:

Killjoy seems like a real cool dude,
Although sometimes is kinda rude.

Baron Max what can I say?
He doesn't really like to play.

Samkey likes to delete my posts,
She seems to like to edit the most.

Absane the mod is quite cool
Only if I follow by his rule!!

Lucifers Angel speaks her mind,
She isn't mean, she seems kind.

Darksidz he needs a girl fast,
Don't know how much longer he'll last.


Well I must have left some of you out,
When you see me please don't shout.

Well I must get back to reading a post,
I wonder which thread I like the most.

Nietzchefan you found a cool place,:cool:
Sorry if I have invaded your space.

Shorty
 
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Hey, this is a poem that i wrote when i was 14... so it's kinda a bit average, but i still like it! (even though it's pretty lame) lol

It's Hard

It's hard to be a teenager,
Trying to be how they want us to be.
Everybody acting like it's ok,
But they only see what they want to see

It's hard seeing someone struggle,
Throughlife, they have no choice,
Of what to do, how to act,
It's like they have no voice

It's hard going through life like this,
Like there's only winters, no springs.
They don't care that when you struggle,
You're like a bird with broken wings

But even though it seems to hard,
Hold onto your dreams tight,
Because soon your broken wings will heal
And then you can take flight....


Well, what do you reckon? like i said, i wrote it when i was 14, so i know it's not great, but hit back with a response anyway! i'd like to hear what you guys reckon of my lame poem! lol
 
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There is a space in this place where I show my face.
Place haste in the race for an increase to peace, lest it cease.
Everyone wants to be from a silent truth.
isolated​
Everything is in constant motion.​
 
I dance
in trance
for roses.

Not you
or us,
but roses.

I mourn
in pain
for roses.

Say farewell
to you
through roses.
 
i fucking
hate
poetry
there are
only 3 poets who

have
ever made anything worthwhile
actually maybe 4
 
Roses are red
violets are blue
I'm having a beer
and so should you

the beer I adore
is golden and frothy
I take it neat
straight out of my potty

my potty is cool
it's kept in the fridge
with decals of flowers
it's waiting for you
 
From the tablariddim school of poetry

Roses are red
violets are blue
i eat biscuits
then sit on the loo

the loo is big
espicially when i shit
but you know
some times i can even knit

not on the loo mind you
but in front a door
where i travel around
but feel its a bore

~~~~~~~~
take it ez
zak
 
tablariddim said:
Roses are red
violets are blue
I'm having a beer
and so should you

the beer I adore
is golden and frothy
I take it neat
straight out of my potty

my potty is cool
it's kept in the fridge
with decals of flowers
it's waiting for you
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Good one I like it.......;)
 
Zakariya04 said:
From the tablariddim school of poetry

Roses are red
violets are blue
i eat biscuits
then sit on the loo

the loo is big
espicially when i shit
but you know
some times i can even knit

not on the loo mind you
but in front a door
where i travel around
but feel its a bore

~~~~~~~~
take it ez
zak
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haha good thing you used the work "loo" cause what the hell would ryhme with toilet...lol
 
work is so boring
I can't wait for the weekend;
ride my mountain bike

I'm too big for a BMX bike,Shorty. Thanks, I think, for including me in your list of members that stand out the most to you. :D
 
mikenostic said:
work is so boring
I can't wait for the weekend;
ride my mountain bike

I'm too big for a BMX bike,Shorty. Thanks, I think, for including me in your list of members that stand out the most to you. :D
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lol i will edit that right now.....;)
 
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