Haiku!

Good reason

If you write Haiku...
You will be very happy.
You might even smile.

RIGHT ON:

Bitchen Haiku dude.
It's rocking my socks straight off.
Tenacious D style.
 
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Re: Good reason

Originally posted by wesmorris
If you write Haiku...
You will be very happy.
You might even smile.

RIGHT ON:

Bitchen Haiku dude.
It's rocking my socks straight off.
Tenacious D style.
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M*W: Phallus is my God
He who covets me
I submit to his command.

I am greater than thee
Phallas, who is my God,
Worships Me for my beauty.

I command Phallas
To obey my wishes,
He who worships me.

Phallus is my God,
Whom I worship,
He is my salvation.

Phallus, my God, is Me.
 
Pretty lies

denial destroys.
can you do more than pretend?
acceptance -> freedom.
 
Okay, I'm new at this but I thought I'd give it a try. This is both a Haiku and a riddle. I'm sure you can guess the answer.

A knock on the door
And Journey through the forest
Led him to riches
 
BTW, haiku's can also be 7-9-7, but that style is newer, and less common.


Bring about a new
first in mind, followed by deed
worlds from your minds eye


New Year's mountaintop
I celebrated moonlight
hiking with a friend


(is it cel-e-brat-ed? or cele-brat-ed?)

resistance on a far moon
cold and barren as hope sinks in fire
to escape Hoth is to live
 
Medicine*Woman said:
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M*W: Phallus is my God
He who covets me
I submit to his command.

I am greater than thee
Phallas, who is my God,
Worships Me for my beauty.

I command Phallas
To obey my wishes,
He who worships me.

Phallus is my God,
Whom I worship,
He is my salvation.

Phallus, my God, is Me.
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So you're saying my haiku's suck phallus?
 
wesmorris said:
So you're saying my haiku's suck phallus?
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M*W: Not in so many words. Although, Phallus IS a GOD. Do I/WE worship him? I don't know. Phallus, himself, doesn't suck "phallus." All Phallus knows how to do is inseminate. Otherwise, he has no brain just a head... with no intention. Phallus, himself, loves adoration as in fellatio. But he must be directed. The only direction Phallus goes in is toward the vagina. If Phallus goes astray, this could be a problem. The only heaven; the only reward; the only fulfillment is when Phallus reaches Vagina and they are One.
 
Medicine*Woman said:
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M*W: Not in so many words. Although, Phallus IS a GOD. Do I/WE worship him? I don't know. Phallus, himself, doesn't suck "phallus." All Phallus knows how to do is inseminate. Otherwise, he has no brain just a head... with no intention. Phallus, himself, loves adoration as in fellatio. But he must be directed. The only direction Phallus goes in is toward the vagina. If Phallus goes astray, this could be a problem. The only heaven; the only reward; the only fulfillment is when Phallus reaches Vagina and they are One.
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Hmm. So I make you think of a brainless cock. *shrug*

I'm not quite sure what to make of that.

Meh, I just thought it was weird to respond with what you did, though pretty interesting if nothing else - and I do wonder what exactly inspired it, or in what context you intend it. Hmmm.. maybe it's just supposed to be art and I'm supposed to shutup and enjoy.

Okay.
 
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Lucysnow said:
Ha Ha I love it! We have got to give proprs to MW, it takes a REAL woman to say that. You go girl!
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But what did she say????????????? I still don't get it!

Hehe, hook a brother up! ;)

Was it just the brainless cock thing? A complicated "you sure are a dullard you silly man" kind of comment? Throw me a frickin bone here.
 
Quote:Hmmm.. maybe it's just supposed to be art and I'm supposed to shutup and enjoy.

Wesmorris I'm sure you always shut up when you're enjoying it.
 
Here Wes:phallus, himself, loves adoration as in fellatio. But he must be directed. The only direction Phallus goes in is toward the vagina. If Phallus goes astray, this could be a problem. The only heaven; the only reward; the only fulfillment is when Phallus reaches Vagina and they are One.


That's the part that tickled me pink
 
Lucysnow said:
Quote:Hmmm.. maybe it's just supposed to be art and I'm supposed to shutup and enjoy.

Wesmorris I'm sure you always shut up when you're enjoying it.
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LOL, yes but I can usually tell when it's happening!

Here I'm uh.. boneless.
 
One thing though. MW's poem isn't really a haiku is it? I mean it doesn't follow haiku 'rules'. Anyway I still liked it.
 
Lucysnow said:
One thing though. MW's poem isn't really a haiku is it? I mean it doesn't follow haiku 'rules'. Anyway I still liked it.
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I thought it was pretty cool too. No, I don't think it follows haiku rules but then again, maybe there's some sophisticated dimensions of haiku of which I'm unaware.
 
Here is what I found on Haiku:

"Japanese haiku have been traditionally composed in 5-7-5 syllables. When poets started writing English haiku in the 1950's, they adopted this 5-7-5 form, thinking it created a similar condition for English-language haiku. This style is what is generally considered "traditional" English haiku.

Over the years, however, most haiku poets in North America have become aware that 17 English syllables convey a great deal more information than 17 Japanese syllables, and have come to write haiku in fewer syllables, most often in three segments that follow a short-long-short pattern without a rigid structure. This style is called by some "free-form" haiku" Forms in English Haiku by Keiko Imaoka

On this site I found some 65 rules or suggestions conserning Haiku. http://www.dada.at/geoff/haiku/rules/
 
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