Here is the speech from Charles Bolden, yesterday, announcing the commencement of one of the most momentous experiments in modern science. “Today, the wheels of Curiosity have begun to blaze the trail for human footprints on Mars. Curiosity, the most sophisticated rover ever built, is now on the surface of the Red Planet, where it will seek to answer age-old questions about whether life ever existed on Mars — or if the planet can sustain life in the future,” said NASA Administrator Charles Bolden. “This is an amazing achievement, made possible by a team of scientists and engineers from around the world and led by the extraordinary men and women of NASA and our Jet Propulsion Laboratory. President Obama has laid out a bold vision for sending humans to Mars in the mid-2030′s, and today’s landing marks a significant step toward achieving this goal.” Take the first sentence "Today, the wheels of Curiosity have begun to blaze the trail for human footprints on Mars." OK He's a scientist, not a playwright, but it made me cringe. Can sciforummers do better?