Saquist's ST vs. SW Story

Discussion in 'SciFi & Fantasy' started by USS Athens, Dec 25, 2007.

  1. Saquist Banned Banned

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    I need more for a draft.
    An outline would be awsome and a place to put the characters at certain points.
    I'll see about a draft.
     
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  3. USS Athens Very Special Senior Member Valued Senior Member

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    So what exactly do you plan to have in the first chapter?
     
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  5. USS Athens Very Special Senior Member Valued Senior Member

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    Well I know you mentioned that you wanted the Jem'Hadar attack in the SW galaxy.
     
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  7. Saquist Banned Banned

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    That's the easy part.
    There the perfect enemy to test the Republic and the Empire and to begin a little misunderstanding between them and the Federation.
    It's frankly the most exciting part.

    The problem is the begining of the Story and getting the Luke and some others invovled...Like Jacen and Leia...What's their angle? Ya know?
     
  8. USS Athens Very Special Senior Member Valued Senior Member

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    I have never read any of the Expanded Universe books so I wouldn't know.

    One of the problems with SW movies, all the charicters are one-dimensional.
     
  9. Saquist Banned Banned

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    That's pretty true...
    Well don't worry about who and what...I really just need someone to bounce ideas off of.

    I've been thinking about having the Grand Admiral of the Imperial's assinated by Luke Skywarlker in the middle of a peace confrence...puttin the Empire against the Republic...

    but that may not be a good idea if they're going to attack the Federation together.
     
  10. FoolFromHell Photons be Free. Registered Senior Member

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    Take my love, take my land, take me where I cannot stand.

    I don't care, I'm still free, you can't take the sky from me...

    Take me out, to the black, tell em I ain't comin back.

    Burn the land and boil the sea, you can't take the sky from me.

    There's no place I can be, since I found Serenity, but you can't take the sky from me...


    Oh wait. Wrong ship. Damn
     
  11. USS Athens Very Special Senior Member Valued Senior Member

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    lol

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  12. USS Athens Very Special Senior Member Valued Senior Member

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    Chapter One Layout

    -Peace conferences take place

    -Luke Assasinates Grand Admiral/Pisses of empire

    Chapter Two

    -Jem'Hadar attack on the Empire

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    C'mon people! I can't be the only one brain storming!
     
  13. Cody Registered Member

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    Sorry to rain on your parade, but that would never happen.
     
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  15. USS Athens Very Special Senior Member Valued Senior Member

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    How so? It's actually something Saq plans on having in his story.

    And Skywalker jedi... Quit randomly posting your nonsence.
     
  16. Cody Registered Member

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    Unless the SD was lowered to under-trek levels, the Jem'Hadar are going to be one-shotted from over ten light-minutes away. Wong wrote a SW vs ST story that DID actually lower the Empire's tech, yet they still won from numbers and mobility.

    And if you'd like to consider, the ISD's have teraton-level shielding.


    I'm sorry, I didn't want to mess anything up, I'm just stating the facts.
     
  17. SkywalkerJedi アスラン・ザラ ( Athrun "Alex" Zala ) Registered Senior Member

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    The death star can take out the federation." Fear will keep the systems in line" they can use Earth and Vulcan as a Demostration of the power of Death Star.
     
  18. Cody Registered Member

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    Maybe Mars as well. They have shipyards there.
     
  19. SkywalkerJedi アスラン・ザラ ( Athrun "Alex" Zala ) Registered Senior Member

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    Good idea, and then they can test it on the Sun and see what happens when you het a superlaser at a sun.
     
  20. Cody Registered Member

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    They already have the Galaxy Gun for blowing up stars.
     
  21. SkywalkerJedi アスラン・ザラ ( Athrun "Alex" Zala ) Registered Senior Member

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    O, i forgot, then they can combin the power of centerpoint, Death Star, Galaxy gun, world devestators, and the Sun Crusher.
     
  22. USS Athens Very Special Senior Member Valued Senior Member

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    Both of you, quit trolling on this thread!

    This is off topic and you should really talk about it on the designated threads.
     
  23. Cody Registered Member

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    Well, earlier I was just saying the Jem'Hadar would never kill an ISD. Reasons a few post above.
     

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