Good reason If you write Haiku... You will be very happy. You might even smile. RIGHT ON: Bitchen Haiku dude. It's rocking my socks straight off. Tenacious D style.
Re: Good reason ---------- M*W: Phallus is my God He who covets me I submit to his command. I am greater than thee Phallas, who is my God, Worships Me for my beauty. I command Phallas To obey my wishes, He who worships me. Phallus is my God, Whom I worship, He is my salvation. Phallus, my God, is Me.
Okay, I'm new at this but I thought I'd give it a try. This is both a Haiku and a riddle. I'm sure you can guess the answer. A knock on the door And Journey through the forest Led him to riches
BTW, haiku's can also be 7-9-7, but that style is newer, and less common. Bring about a new first in mind, followed by deed worlds from your minds eye New Year's mountaintop I celebrated moonlight hiking with a friend (is it cel-e-brat-ed? or cele-brat-ed?) resistance on a far moon cold and barren as hope sinks in fire to escape Hoth is to live
---------- M*W: Not in so many words. Although, Phallus IS a GOD. Do I/WE worship him? I don't know. Phallus, himself, doesn't suck "phallus." All Phallus knows how to do is inseminate. Otherwise, he has no brain just a head... with no intention. Phallus, himself, loves adoration as in fellatio. But he must be directed. The only direction Phallus goes in is toward the vagina. If Phallus goes astray, this could be a problem. The only heaven; the only reward; the only fulfillment is when Phallus reaches Vagina and they are One.
Hmm. So I make you think of a brainless cock. *shrug* I'm not quite sure what to make of that. Meh, I just thought it was weird to respond with what you did, though pretty interesting if nothing else - and I do wonder what exactly inspired it, or in what context you intend it. Hmmm.. maybe it's just supposed to be art and I'm supposed to shutup and enjoy. Okay.
But what did she say????????????? I still don't get it! Hehe, hook a brother up! Please Register or Log in to view the hidden image! Was it just the brainless cock thing? A complicated "you sure are a dullard you silly man" kind of comment? Throw me a frickin bone here.
Quote:Hmmm.. maybe it's just supposed to be art and I'm supposed to shutup and enjoy. Wesmorris I'm sure you always shut up when you're enjoying it.
Here WesPlease Register or Log in to view the hidden image!hallus, himself, loves adoration as in fellatio. But he must be directed. The only direction Phallus goes in is toward the vagina. If Phallus goes astray, this could be a problem. The only heaven; the only reward; the only fulfillment is when Phallus reaches Vagina and they are One. That's the part that tickled me pink
One thing though. MW's poem isn't really a haiku is it? I mean it doesn't follow haiku 'rules'. Anyway I still liked it.
I thought it was pretty cool too. No, I don't think it follows haiku rules but then again, maybe there's some sophisticated dimensions of haiku of which I'm unaware.
Here is what I found on Haiku: "Japanese haiku have been traditionally composed in 5-7-5 syllables. When poets started writing English haiku in the 1950's, they adopted this 5-7-5 form, thinking it created a similar condition for English-language haiku. This style is what is generally considered "traditional" English haiku. Over the years, however, most haiku poets in North America have become aware that 17 English syllables convey a great deal more information than 17 Japanese syllables, and have come to write haiku in fewer syllables, most often in three segments that follow a short-long-short pattern without a rigid structure. This style is called by some "free-form" haiku" Forms in English Haiku by Keiko Imaoka On this site I found some 65 rules or suggestions conserning Haiku. http://www.dada.at/geoff/haiku/rules/
