Antietam, Maryland

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  1. cingolani_c Charles Banned

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    Antietam, Maryland

    They sat around fires
    the night before engaging
    being prodded
    to their highest hours
    by figures they saw
    on orange tongues
    of dancing desire
    thrusting flickering forks
    at their secure dens
    of cowardice and fear,
    and they revelled in
    that seduction.

    Until weakness would curl in
    over them
    in the lulls between
    and bury their boldest
    affirmations
    in tides of dark portents
    as to the morrow
    with the lines breaking
    the flash of bayonets
    against September sun,
    the crash headlong or crumpled
    on moistened soil
    while all around
    the tumult, the pounding of hooves
    the swish of flags
    crescendoing,
    and then
    the slow cessation of sound.


    from: Along the Way : Collected Poems

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  3. dixonmassey Valued Senior Member

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    One thing I don't understand is: why the above creation is called poem? It looks like near rhymeless accumulation of words. Probably, it's a modern English language thing.
     
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  5. hypewaders Save Changes Registered Senior Member

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    Thank you for the link, Charles- poetry that is vivid, pithy, well-crafted, well worth savoring.
     
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  7. robtex Registered Senior Member

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    rhyming is not a requirement to be called poetry but I see what you are saying. There is a fine line between poetry and prose.
     

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