NOT THE STORY Monday morning, I was running some important errands. As I was driving, I started thinking about how evil movies are. The bad guy always tends to inanvertently die at the end or some silly ending. I have commented on this before. Right then and there, I came up with an idea for a story. 2 people with the same end goal of world peace, but with conflicting means. One doesn't mind sacrificing the few to save the many. The other one does not believe in sacrificing anybody. I started writing it Monday afternoon, and finished it yestrday afternoon. ROUGH PLOT SUMMARY DRAFT This is a very rough plot summary. All the names in this document will definitely be redone. Much of the storyline, dialogue, subplots will be revamped. I have organized the draft into many sections. OPENING The story begins with Nivica, a flirtatious elite living in a great and prosperous city of the future. The charming and handsome prince of the region is infatuated with Nivica, a merchant elite. He will likely court Nivica until she cannot resist but marry him. In an encounter, at the piazza, she meets a roguish individual who’s motives are unclear. Regardless, she reluctantly finds herself attracted to him. BACKGROUND The futuristic planet of Rentari is under deception and oppression by a handful of plutocratic factions contending for global control. Jacob runs a facility for scientific research, city design, and pacifism. He marries his lab assistant Ruth, a geneticist. Together, they work towards dreams of freedom and truth. The facility is located within a region in the midst of internal political strife. Soon, the region falls into control of the Torin Faction. The entire region becomes a very powerful military state. However, the Torin Faction has no interest in global domination. Torin declares their occupied region as neutral. Although the region and the social/political structure is in the form of a military base, its entire military is used only to protect the region from outside invasion. Jacob utterly refuses to allow his facility to be used for military and weapons research/advancement, and falls into conflict with the dominating Torin Faction. The conflict is soon resolved as the Jacob Facility provides the region with scientific advancement for the betterment of the public within the city. Meanwhile, Ruth gets pregnant. Ruth and her lab assistant, Calvin, are involved in a lab accident, but are not injured. Soon Ruth gives birth to twin boys, A and B. Later, Calvin realizes he has developed super powers from the lab accident. He leaves disappearing from his job without notice. Ruth also realizes she has super powers. TORIN When the boys get a little older, Jacob and Ruth realize that they are developing super powers based on the experiment during the lab accident. The boys are hidden under their parent’s supervision. Their powers are kept secret to a select few in Jacob and Ruth’s inner circle. They boys grow up learning to control their powers. As Torin grows to be a major center for scientific advancement thanks in part to the researches at the Jacob Facility, Torin begins to enter global agreements with other factions to further secure themselves as an independent and friendly neutral state. They are a center for providing scientific achievements to all global regions without bias. Powerful factions of the globe agree not to attack Torin so that Torin may continue with scientific advancements that they all rely on. PEMOS Pemos is a very powerful faction controlling a large territory. Their territory is known for having the richest resources in the world. Pemos provides a great amount of resources to another faction called, Lematrib who aided the Pemos Faction in securing control over the resource-rich region. Lematrib is twice as large and twice as powerful as Pemos. Lematrib controls many regions throughout the globe, using them for their abundant resources. These regions are also structured with labor camp factories for mass production of consumer and industrial goods for Lematrib and other powerful factions. ASSASSIN Eventually Jacob and Ruth are murdered by an unknown super powered assassin hired by a secret villain trying to capture the boys for experimentation. How did the super villain find out about the boys? Even the assassin doesn’t know. The twins are in their preteens, old enough to control their powers very well like walking and talking. With the death of their parents, they fall into the custody of caretakers who decide to separate them in different secret locations to keep them safe. They say goodbye to each other, and go their separate ways. CALVIN Calvin, the super powered scientist from the Torin region uses his superhuman abilities to rise to power. Eventually, he sets his eyes on Pemos. Calvin raises an army, and goes into conflict with Pemos. He plans to take control of Pemos as a stepping stone for global domination. Skirmishes ensue. Through his illicit actions ignoring all forms of global diplomacy, he becomes world renowned as a super villain. The boys are in their later teens, and both have separately studied scientific and activist work of their parents to great extent under the supervision of their separate scientist caretakers. Both of them want to continue their parent’s activism for a free society. With Pemos in constant conflict with Calvin’s faction, they request aid from Lematrib. A leader of the Fuster faction in Lematrib prevents Lematrib from aiding Pemos. Without aid from Lematrib, Pemos leaders decide to discontinue trading to Lematrib, and begin focusing on threat of Calvin’s armies. LEMATRIB Lematrib elites suffer financially from losing a regular supply of goods and resources from Pemos. The Lematrib Faction itself wants to launch a full scale attack to take full control over Pemos. However, other factions within Lematrib territory decide it would be better instead to begin secretly supporting Calvin’s army. Such a strategy worked well on other territories such as Achiss. With Calvin’s defeat over Pemos, Calvin will surely turn Pemos into another Achiss, but supplying even greater resources than Achiss. RESULTS Pemos with overwhelming might causes the Calvin Faction to rethink their strategies. Calvin discontinues attacks on Pemos, and focuses on internal stabilization as well as using resources from Lematrib support on efforts to overtake another less powerful territory. The Lematrib Faction eventually convinces other factions within Lematrib to allow them to go forth with their plans to take full Factional control over Pemos. Pemos super abundant resources will further their motives for complete global control. Under global scrutiny, however, Lematrib has no justification for invading Pemos. Invading Pemos on the basis that they refuse to trade their resources would cause dissent in Lematrib supporters who believe the Lematrib Faction to be a great and benevolent leader. Such an invasion would ruin their reputation causing them to be publicly seen in a similar sense as Calvin’s overtly villainous faction. Such infamy would surely lead to great internal strife. TWIN A Twin A, now safely located within the Lematrib region, discovers a secret plot by the Lematrib Faction to destroy one of their own cities killing thousands of people. They are rumored to blame the act on Pemos in order to justify an invasion and occupation of Pemos. Twin A puts on a mask and a crude outfit to embark on solo mission to put a stop to Lematrib’s plot. Twin A’s first battle ensues with great success. Suddenly, the Lematrib forces deploy a superhuman unit to stop Twin A. Twin A is eventually faced with a decision to save the city or save himself. Faced with overwhelming odds that there is nothing he can do to save the city, Twin A chooses to save himself. Lematrib’s plan is a success, and the city is destroyed. Two of the operatives from the Super Unit remain in pursuit of Twin A after the explosion. Unbeknownst to Twin A, it is the assassin that killed his parents and the assassin’s sister. The assassin likewise does not suspect that it is one of the twins he failed to obtain in that mission years ago. Regardless, capturing a superhuman could lead to promotion and great rewards. Twin A escapes. RETALIATION The people of Lematrib are angry, and want vengeance on whoever is responsible. Even the people of Pemos gather in grief to mourn the victim’s of this heinous act. To Twin A’s surprise, Lematrib publicly blames the explosion on the Calvin Faction instead of Pemos. Lematrib faction leaders deemed that it would be easier for them to convince the public that an overtly villainous group committed the act than the rich nation of Pemos. They plan to declare war on Calvin, and eventually convince the public that Pemos was backing Calvin the whole time. Thereby justifying an invasion of Pemos. As a result of being blamed for the explosion with the motive of being jealous over Lematrib’s freedom, the Calvin Faction severs all ties with Lematrib who used to help them fight Pemos. They even discontinue conflict on weaker territories, and go into hiding to regroup. Lematrib prepares an attack on the Calvin Faction. TWIN A SURFACES Riddled with guilt that he could have possibly saved the city, Twin A begins secretly using his powers for rescue missions remaining disguised under a mask and a new and improved suit. He is soon wanted by Lematrib authorities, but is gaining public admiration. Soon the mysterious villain that hired the assassin long ago becomes aware of this masked hero’s abilities. Could it be that the twins have surfaced? TWIN B Meanwhile, Twin B, in a territory controlled by the Achiss Faction, is living in safety, and leading as normal a life as possible. The territory was formally known as the peaceful land of Yanan. The entire land and resources of Yanan was used by the people of Yanan for the people of Yanan. One side of factions did not want to trade Yanan resources to global factions. Other factions wanted to gain power through trade with global factions. Through trade with global factions, Achiss managed to gain power in Yanan. They gaining greater control over the Yanan people, and their resources. Yanan rebels who refused to cooperate with Achiss leaders were massacred. The other factions would not stand for it, and went to war with the Achiss faction. Global super factions secretly decided to support the Achiss Faction providing them with military power to violently smite the Yanan rebels. Much violence ensued as Yanan freedom fighters fought Achiss to the best of their abilities. The people of Yanan were labeled evil communists for their refusal to trade globally. The Achiss were considered benevolent freedom fighters who want open trade against the evil communists who want to keep Achiss resources for themselves. After their victory, the Achiss Faction, now in full control of Yanan resources became very rich. The name of the entire Yanan territory was changed to Achiss. The Achiss Faction headquarters is in the small but majestic province of Tembasa in the southern area of Achiss. While the province of Tembasa enjoys great riches, the remainder of the Achiss southern area remains in civil turmoil. The Achiss northern area is riddled with labor camps. Tembasa, where Twin B resides, is the richest city/province in the world. Twin B is thoroughly convinced that his brother is the masked renegade in Lematrib. Following his twin brother’s initiative, Twin B’s goal is to free Achiss, and use his father’s ideas and advancements to build a free life for the Yanan people. Twin B single handedly robs the national reserves, and distributes the money to various activist groups in Southern Achiss. Twin B then proceeds to take down a small labor camp in Northern Achiss helping factory workers flee safely into Southern Achiss in the secret protection of one of the activist groups. Twin B assassinates the factory contractor in charge of this particular labor camp. He leaves no witnesses alive. With the culprit and motives of both incidents unknown, the lead investigator of Achiss manages to connect the M-Os of both hits. The media reports them as terrorist acts. In retaliation to these terrorist acts, the Achiss military violently presses known activist groups for the culprit’s identity. To put a stop to the violence, an activist leader takes credit as the culprit of both incidents. The activist leader is apprehended to be put to death. In a massive public execution ceremony, Twin B surfaces in his outfit in front of everybody, and disrupts the execution freeing the activist leader. Guards attack Twin B who easily takes them down. Twin B is finally confronted with the superhuman general. As he escapes the general’s clutches, Twin B tells him that he will kill the emperor, and take the land back for the Yananians. VILAT Meanwhile, the Vilat Faction in Lematrib is a demonic cult worshiping the dark-mage, Vilat. Vilat is getting ready to execute his campaign of transforming himself and the global population into demonic creatures to claim the planet for the demon overlord. Twin A is in pursuit. In the final battle between Twin A and Vilat, Vilat loses. The Lematrib Super Unit enters the fray to finish Vilat off, and take Twin A into custody. Instead of allowing Vilat to die at the hands of the Lematrib Super Unit, Twin A rescues Vilat, and brings him in front of the media turning him into authorities ensuring that Vilat will be granted a fair trial. TWIN B SQUAD In Achiss, with the activist leader free, and Twin B exposed, Twin B gets help from various activists to find and recruit members one by one to put together a squad. After miscellaneous conflicts, a squad emerges, and sets forth on their first mission to capture a convoy of Progress Consoles (computers of the future), and distribute them among the poor communities of Achiss. A battle ensues, and the consoles are obtained. Half of them are distributed, and the other half is given to an activist leader who will use them to establish underground educational facilities for babies in poor areas of Northern Achiss. (A great leader will eventually emerge from one of these educational facilities.) RAPEL Meanwhile, in Lematrib, Twin A has been spotted, and the Super Unit has been deployed to apprehend him. Rapel, the assassin’s little sister is late again. She decides to meet them there. She is the only one that knows that her brother is secretly an assassin. She also intends to follow in his footsteps. With her outfit still in her bag, she arrives on the scene. The Super Unit is already battling Twin A. While looking for a place to change, she is struck down in the fray. In the heat of battle, Twin A manages to trick the Super Unit into going a different direction while he remains hidden. He changes into his regular self, and discovers a beautiful girl screaming for help. She is trapped under debris. After he rescues Rapel, they proceed to go on a date. They discuss/debate global issues revealing background information about the various factions. Romance seems to be brewing. Neither of them know about their dual identities. TEMBASA Twin B’s squad makes their way into the Achiss stronghold in Tembasa with Twin B leading them. Their master plan is to pose as servants in fake beards and wigs to get close Achiss elites. A friend on the inside working as a servant introduces them to the manager claiming they would make great servants for the Prince’s birthday party later in the evening. While working the birthday party, they gather as much information as they can to return for the actual strike. Twin B notices the prince with a merchant elite girl. They all learn of the latest great weapon they built for sale to Lematrib. It is a super powered stealth vehicle. When the party ends, and the servants are cleaning up, they are surrounded by heavily armed forces. Somebody has sold information to the leaders that Twin B’s squad is posing as servants. The squad is discovered, and an escape ensues resulting in a casualty of a squad member and capture of another one. The surviving escapees manage to get away unrecognized in their beards and wigs. Plans for their friend’s rescue mission are immediately underway. VILLAGE In the meantime, Lematrib is pressing hard on the Calvin faction. Innocents are dying as a result of Lematrib’s violence upon regions where the Calvin faction are known to operate. Twin A embarks on a mission to put a stop to a Lamantrib war operation in an area where many innocent villagers live and work. The leader, in search of Calvin supporters, plans to search and seize the households destroying any who refuse to cooperate. Twin A disrupts the operation, and a battle ensues. Twin A is successful without a single casualty. Soldiers return to headquarters informing Lematrib leaders of Twin A’s presence. Twin A prepares to go up against the Lematrib Super Unit in order to protect the village. THE MINE Twin B is introduced to a Pemosian who has traveled to Achiss to request aid from Twin B. The Pemosian tells Twin B that he needs help securing a slave mine in Pemos that is being used to gather materials for Pemos territorial expansion plans. Twin B is not sure about it as he does not know what is so important about this particular mine. The Pemosian assures Twin B that the mine is absolutely necessary for Pemos’s military intentions. The Pemosian is a faction leader who wants to secure the mine for the sake of disrupting Pemos activities as well as strengthening his own freedom rebellion against Pemos Faction leaders. The Pemosian will provide half of his faction’s weapons and vehicles for Twin B to use for freedom operations in Achiss. All in hopes that his success in Achiss will eventually lead to freedom operations assistance in Pemos. Twin B decides he could use these spoils to rescue his friend. The Pemosian tells Twin B that his friend is likely being tortured to death as they speak, and to use these spoils for more worthy operations. Twin B declines the Pemosian’s offer in order to focus on more important matters of rescuing his friend. The decides to Pemosian offer to help Twin B rescue his friend first as long as Twin B promises to help the Pemosian free the mine in Pemos after this pointless rescue mission of his friend. Twin B gives his word to help the Pemosian. Little does Twin B know, hidden deep within the mine is an artifact that can be used to free the this particular Pemosian’s former master: Vilat. Not even Pemos leaders are aware of this artifact. The Pemosian needs to recover the artifact before Pemos leaders become aware of it, and use it for their own purposes. A weapons facility in Southern Achiss will be transporting a very powerful stealth vehicle to the port for shipment out to Lematrib who already paid for it. They are not sure what time the Stealth will be shipped out, but they know it will be sometime the next night. They intend steal the Stealth, and use it as a bargaining tool for their friend’s life. The Pemosian has to decide whether or not to risk everything to help them with such a fruitless mission. The Stealth will be heavily guarded. Twin B says that the Pemosian does not have to come along on the mission. Furthermore, he only needs to provide them with whatever spoils he has at hand. If they don’t make it, all the Pemosian will lose are the spoils at hand. If they do, the Pemosian will give them half of his factions spoils, and they will proceed with the Pemos Mine mission. DECISIONS Twin A must now make a decision of whether or not to face off against the Lematrib Super Unit. He knows they will come. He’s sure of it. Even if he wins, what will he do with them? Can he win? He must protect the villagers. What if Lematrib attacks other villages at the same time? How can he protect everybody at once? He wishes his parents were alive. They always had the solution for everything. If only he was as smart as they were. He tells himself he can do this. Twin A is helping the village recover from the attempted assault. The village kids ask him all kinds of questions. He speaks to the chief asking if there are weapons the villagers can gather in the case they need to do battle. One of the villagers says they have thousands of something, but the chief hushes him. Twin A tells the chief that now is not the time for keeping secrets, and to rally up the villagers to gather the weapons. He goes explores the village surroundings, and meets a beautiful girl. They talk for awhile, and they soon make their way towards the villagers who have gathered the weapons. CONVERSATION WITH VILLAGE GIRL Twin A, walking through the village, hears a sullen voice in the background. “They’ll be back won’t they?” He turns around to see a beautiful girl posted up against a wall with her foot on it, and knee out. Girl (Sullen.): We’re as sure as dead aren’t we? Twin A (Appearing confident, but mildly unsure.): I won’t let that happen. Girl (Serious, but no emotion.): You’re lying. They’ll be back with more, and eventually over power you won’t they? Not even a masked weirdo like you will stand a chance when they swarm the hell out of you from all sides will you? Twin A (The girl reminds him of Rapel.): I think they will be back, darling, but I intend to ward them off before they come close to this village. (A little more confidently.) I will stop them before they lay a hand on anybody here. Now why don’t you go run along, and milk some cows or something? (Twin A turns around to focus on the livestock.) Cow: Moo! Girl (Walking towards Twin A. Inquisitive/serious.): What are you doing anyway? Twin A: Don’t you got some corn to harvest or something? Girl(Still serious.): Look here super-tights, we ran out of corn when your fat-*ss mama ate it all. (Girl turns around to walk away.) Twin A (Wishing mom was around): I don’t know what I’m doing ok. (Girl stops.) I’m just waiting for everybody to round up whatever weapons this village has left, so I can help them devise an escape strategy in case the enemy. . . In case Lematrib decides to annihilate everybody here. Girl (Becoming despondent.): Why is this happening? Twin A (Moving in to hug the girl.): My dad used to tell me that all the problems in this world are rooted in people’s lack of desire to pursue truth and understanding. I don’t know if I’ll ever be as smart as my parents were, but I can assure your ass they pretty much embedded something in me at an early age. Girl: (Looking up at her new friend.): A psychotic will to dress up in a mask and tights? Twin A: No. (Sighing, and peeling her off. Looking nostalgic.) The key to intelligence. Girl: They embedded the key to intelligence in your tights? Twin A: The awareness that all problems have a solution. (Girl stares at him in bewilderment. He realizes she doesn’t seem to get it.) The key to intelligence. They said it was the awareness that. . . Never mind. You heard what I said. Girl: Yes. The key to intelligence. All problems have a solution. Twin A: Ya. Girl: Not this one. Twin A: Shouldn’t you be helping everybody gather arms? Girl: I didn’t even know they had weapons. I’m pretty sure they don’t. Besides, I’m a pacifist. I don’t touch weapons. Twin A: (Thinking to himself): “So were my parents”. (Out loud): Great. . . Let’s go. He takes her hand, and yanks her down the path. They walk towards the gathering group of villagers. Girl (Walking a little faster to catch up.): I have a solution. Twin A (Sarcastically.): What a surprise. Girl: Seriously. Twin A: OK? Girl: Let’s go find Calvin, catch his behind, and turn him in. Then, they’ll leave us alone. Twin A: Ya ok. Let’s find him. (Waving his hand around the huge expanse of nature surrounding the village for miles.) Then, let’s catch him. A really powerful super being. Real simple. Good luck with that. Should I even mention how great your theory is about (quoting with his fingers) “then they’ll leave us alone”? Girl: Like you got some better solutions. (As they come upon the gathering of villagers, the kids run up to them skipping and grabbing their hands.) Twin A (Holding hands with 8 kids at the same time.): Where are the weapons? Chief: They’re in here, but. . . Twin A: (Looking at the 4 foot cubed box being carried effortlessly as if nothing was in it by one of the villagers.) I thought you said you had thousands. What’s in there? A balled up sheet of paper? Are you seriously planning to throw paper balls at the enemy? Chief: Open it. (The villager puts the box down, and opens it. Twin A lets go of all the kids hands, and moves toward the box. Inside is a sort of oasis eco system, and thousands of little flying things about the size of bees, but thin like dragonflies. Twin A takes a closer look. One of them flies up hovering right in front of his face. It’s a fairy.) Twin A (Expressing eureka.): Fairies. RESCUE A battle in Achiss ensues as Twin B’s squad obtains the Stealth. The squad lead by Twin B and the aid of he Pemosian manages to pull off their friend’s rescue mission without losing the stealth as an added bonus. Unfortunately, this friend that they risked their lives to rescue is the informant who intends to become rich selling their secrets to the Achiss. FAIRIES Twin A never knew fairies existed, but he knew they had to be the solution to this situation. He always thought they were part of “fairy” tales. There were thousands of them. Some of them naked, and some of them wearing little clothes. He begins asking what they can do. If they can blow stuff up. He is told the fairies have the power to heal wounds, invulnerability, flight, teleportation, remote communication with one another, and small electric stings. Nothing major. Vast knowledge of nature. They draw energy from living trees rooted in the earth. They are a race of intelligent beings once friendly to humans, but went into hiding when trees were being what the fairies see as murdered. Fairies can understand human communication. Humans cannot understand the fairies, but it is revealed that the village girl can understand them. She has been the village ambassador to the fairies. Her abilities lead to friendship between the fairies and the people of the village. ARTIFACT Twin B proceeds to Pemos with the Pemosian, Renzi. The Renzi Faction with the aid of Twin B attacks the mine. Pemos forces enter the fray. Twin B and Renzi are about to be defeated when Vilat Acolytes appear, and a 3-way battle ensues for the mine. Renzi manages to get away with the artifact with Vilat claim victory over the mine. Back at Renzi’s estate, Twin B learns the truth about the artifact. In the middle of the night, Vilat Acolytes swarm the estate. They are defeated by Renzi’s superior forces, and retreat back to their newly secured mine. They have possession of the artifact which they will use to free Vilat himself. VILLAGE BATTLE With the aid of the fairies, Twin A sets a trap for the Super Unit. Super Unit retreats in defeat while Lematrib armed forces press on towards the village. Fairies do their best ward them off causing major destruction. With the Super Unit back on their feet, the fairies must retreat into the forest. Twin A faces off alone against Lematrib forces and the Super Unit. Twin A is about to be crushed for good when out of nowhere another Superhuman comes to the rescue. It’s Calvin. Calvin and his troops fend off the Super Unit, and are fixing to take down Twin A. Calvin tells Twin A that his mother was good to him, and he respected Twin A’s parents. Thus, he will spare Calvin’s life this time. Calvin and his troops exit the scene. MERCHANT GIRL Nivica who in the beginning of the story is introduced as an elite is falling for the Prince Achiss. Twin B, after the botch up in Pemos, is back in Achiss to proceed with his plans of infiltration. His plan is to get close to Nivica in order to get close to the Achiss Royalty. His contacts in Tembasa spy on Nivica. Lots of information on Nivica is gained. Twin B will use this information for his strategy. Nivica is spotted at the Piazza in Tembasa, and Twin B moves in introducing himself as Bolisworth. In the best seduction sequence even, Bolisworth continues seduction over Nivica. CODIT Twin A recovering from battle is back in Lematrib. The village is safe for now under the protection of the fairies, and the girl. His friends are upset because he has been distant. Rapel is beginning to have second thoughts about him. His mission is to rekindle his friendships, and see if Rapel is worth his time. He has a great time with Rapel and friends. Vilat is being held at a security center in the Codit region. Vilat Acolytes battle Lematrib Super Unit to rescue their leader. With the help of the artifact, Vilat is out, and more powerful than ever taking hostages in Codit. Both Twins hear of the situation, and proceed to the scene. They meet up for the first time in years. The twins with Twin B’s squad and Renzi hit the scene, and rescue the hostages. Vilat manages to escape taking his faction with him underground. Meanwhile, Lematrib has begun their invasion of Pemos. The twins are compelled to put an end to this bloodshed. Somebody in Calvin’s Faction gives the Twins information on Calvin’s whereabouts. Calvin is in Codit. The team immediately seeks out Calvin to aid them in disrupting the Lematrib invasion. They find Calvin who refuses. Instead, Calvin tries to convince them to join his faction, and help him to reestablish his army. Calvin’s ambition is to hold the seat of global domination where he rightfully belongs. He will use any means necessary to over power Lematrib and other powerful factions. He informs the twins of an island Lematrib has their yes on. He wants the twins to help him take the Lematrib troops at the island down when they attempt to secure it. This will put a dent in Lematribs progress, and secure the island as an important strategical position for the Calvin Faction. The twins agree that it would be best to put a stop to Calvin’s potential now before he can amass another campaign for global domination. The team battles Calvin and his troops, and are utterly defeated. Calvin allows them to go free, and warns them not to interfere with his efforts. Twin B is ready to inform Lematrib on Calvin’s whereabouts. Twin A disagrees because it will lead to more bloodshed. Twin B claims that if they wait longer, there will be even more bloodshed when Calvin’s army becomes more powerful. Twin A is convinced there is a better way. He tells Twin B to hold off on informing Lematrib while he devices a plan of action. Twin A intends to succeed. LABOR CAMPS News in Achiss has surfaced about another labor camp death. Activists are claiming that the pay is too low, the hours are too long, and they are being treated like slaves. Achiss media suggests that the people of Achiss should be thankful for all of the factory job opportunities. Without consistent trade with global factions, the people of Achiss would be out of work, and unable to feed themselves. At least with work, they can afford food and squatter flats in Northern Achiss. The activists in Achiss are complaining that all of the Achiss taxes are going straight to Lematrib. There is not enough funding for schools, medicine, and other public necessities. Schools and other public services are shutting down. They want better amenities for the workers as exemplified in Torin. Achiss is in debt to Lematrib who loaned them funding for rebuilding after the evil communists tried to take over the territory. 90% of that funding went towards Achiss elites in Tembasa who needed new luxuries. As a result of such debt, 50% of taxes in Achiss must go towards paying off debt to the benevolent Lematrib. Lematrib uses this debt income to trade with other factions. An activist group has moved in to free an Achiss labor camp. Achiss military moves in to smite this activist group. Twin B is back in Achiss, and is immediately at the aid of the activists. Achiss military units retreat. After the battle, he spends the weekend at home in Tembasa to concentrate on his internship while he continues to get closer to Nivica. SCHOOL Twin A will have to deal with the Calvin situation after exam week. School has been one of his strong points. He’s good at it, and doesn’t wants to be successful at it. Rapel and his friends want to have fun. After the exams, Twin A plans to meet with his brother to disrupt the Pemos invasion. YACOGO The peaceful small island of Yacogo has no actual resources other than coconuts. However, it has some of the most beautiful natural white sand beaches. The inhabitants of Yacogo live an easy life on the beautiful island. There is a small palace at the center of the island with a coconut plantation. The people of Yacogo have abundant income from their coconut trade. After failing to find Calvin, and losses at the village, Lematrib will divert those resources towards Yacogo. Yacogo has no military. Taking the island will be easy. This island is an important strategic location for setting up satellite and military outpost for their invasion of Pemos. A quarter of the island will be used for a military base. Another quarter of it will be used for a golf course for Faction elites. Half of it will be used to build bars, restaurants, and resorts for global elites and vacationers. The twins remain in contact with each other, and decide that interrupting Lematrib’s invasion of Pemos would not be worth the effort. However, the Island of Yacogo belongs to the Yacogo people. It should be kept safe from Lematrib’s and Calvin’s dirty clutches. Lematrib proceeds to the island with minimum forces. They round up the Yacogo villagers for execution when Calvin and his troops arrive completely overpowering the Lematrib troop. The twins are back in action, and manage to fight off Calvin and his troops. VILAT RETURNS Vilat resurfaces causing major havock in Lematrib and Pemos. Both militaries are now in battle with Vilat and his superhuman acolyte forces. Vilat occupies a gateway in a forest in Pemos. The twins and their team recruit the fairies and the girl to help them infiltrate the Vilat gateway and stronghold. There is a huge battle, and the twins are left fighting Vilat alone. They finally defeat him, and Twin B is ready to kill him. TWINS FIGHT Twin A: We got to turn him in. Twin B: Why the f*ck? So he can escape again? Twin A: You can’t kill him. Twin B: Wanna bet? (B moves in to kill Vilat, and A attacks him.) Twin A: Stop it jack*ss. It’s over. We got the motherf*cker. Aint no need for further bloodshed. (B attacking A. Dialogue proceeds as they fight.) Twin B: Yes it is. We need to put his ass the f*ck out before he wakes up. He’s to damn powerful. Twin A: His life aint yours to take. Twin B: Bullsh*t. If you would have killed his f*ck *ass the first time, this whole situation would never have happened. Twin A: Idiot! Twin B: Moron! Twin A: There are lots of things that could have been done to prevent Vilat from bussing lose on a rampage. Taking a human life aint one of them. Twin B: Human? Have you seen his ass? Twin A: We also got powers retard. Is you suggesting that we aint human too? Twin B: Motherfucker I aint suggesting shit other than we kill this sick twisted loony bin. We need to take him out! Asshole! He’s finna come back! Twin A: Not necessarily ho! Twin B: Definitely not if he’s dead. He’s gonna come back, Twin A. And it’s gonna be all your fault again. You shouldn’t have even saved him from the Super Unit the first time. Twin A: How in the hell? This whole thing was all your fault for sucking at the mines. Any moron could have kept that gadd*m artifact secure from them dumb acolyte losers. Twin B: Enough. Stop fighting. What do you suggest? Capture him, and then what? Waste everybody’s time and resources putting him through the whole bullsh*t execution process? The oppressors had him up for execution anyway. (Fighting ceases.) Twin A: Get a f*cking grip on yourself. Human on human violence is an act of psychosis. There is no such thing as rationalizing it. It’s insane either way. Stop being so damn dumb! Twin B: Words from true geniuses. Mom and dad huh? They always had a knack for being right. “There is always a better way kids. And intelligent people always find it. Violence is never a solution.” Were they ever wrong about anything? They also said that our actions are based on what we feel to be right at any given moment. Twin A: We tend to assess whatever situation we are in, and make a decision. Should we fight back? Should we flee? What are the risks? What are the rewards? Most of all, is it ethical or is it unethical? Twin B: Right. Moralists don’t decide what is the ethical and unethical action to take. They only choose to be compelled without choice to whatever they believe to be ethical. And you do not choose what you believe. Twin A: We need to take him in. Twin B: You win this time. Do whatever you want. Don’t blame me when he returns. I’ll be in Achiss if you need me. ESCAPE Twin A approaches Vilat. Vilat has regained consciousness, and fights the twins again. He manages to keep the 2 at bay enough to make his grand escape taking his remaining acolytes with him, and closing the gateway. Twin A: Dammit! Twin B: He’s gone. Twin A and B at the same time: This is all your damn fault. NEXT STAGES After Vilat’s rampage, Pemos is left in a weakened state with no choice but to surrender. Violence ceases as Lematrib claims the Pemos land for themselves. A major controlling faction in Lematrib, called Shigotrice, is holding a meeting. Using technology from the Jacob Facility, Torin’s military technology facility has completed engineering a new microscopic device. Soon the Shigotrice will implement a major move in their effort towards global control. Everybody for their own safety will be required to be fitted with a microscopic implant. Such an implant will monitor their health, personal identification, finances, and more. It will also be used for financial transactions like credit cards. They will be able to measure an individuals debt including the debt the individual will incur for the mandatory implant procedure. The Shigotrice leader has wanted to experiment on the twins from the beginning. NOTES This script/story is far from done. I intend to make Twin B much more evil. The duality between Twin A and B is a major theme in this story. They both want the exact same outcome of peace, but use different methods based on their ethics. There will be major overhauls making everything much more cohesive. Most of what is written here are outlines of the story progression. The romantic aspect plays a major role. Nivica becomes much more involved as Tembasa falls under attack, and she has a love affair with the terrorist leader. The story will definitely not be told in the order as seen here. The perspective of the first part of the story will be told through the perspective of Lematrib being the protagonist, and the Twins being evil terrorists. The truth surfaces as the plot unfolds. The story is heavily dialogue driven. Most of the entertainment and captivation of the story comes from the dialogue. The secondary entertainment comes from the action sequences, emotional sequences, and fantasy/scifi imagery. The intention of the story lies in is its saturation of philosophy, ethics, creativity, and intelligence which will be rewritten to make very easy to grasp. While being attracted to the entertainment aspect, the audience will be flooded with education and understanding.
