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  1. #261
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    Link?

    Originally posted by airavata
    Medicinelady, you mind posting a link to all these poems? This is a thread for ORIGINAL poetry, not stuff by other poets. It's getting irritating especially when all the stuff here was original, member stuff. If you want us to read some poetry of kirsty whoever just post a link or start a seperate thread. Don't throw this one off.
    There is no link that contains my poetry. This is original poetry that I have written under my pen name. I have already responded to your previous email about this. I would be happy to start a separate thread. My works have been published previously but not on the Internet. Would it be okay to start a thread of my poetry only? I thought that this would be rather tacky.

  2. #262
    So Kristy something is your pen name? I thought she was a poet whom you liked, and you were posting her poems here. Sorry for the misunderstanding Medicine Woman.

  3. #263
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    Originally posted by airavata
    So Kristy something is your pen name? I thought she was a poet whom you liked, and you were posting her poems here. Sorry for the misunderstanding Medicine Woman.
    Thankkkkkkkkks!

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    Here's my piece :




    The Glimmer



    Through a cave's dark belows,
    shines a light's stark yellow.
    Chimes aloud sparked by wind,
    soon the flame starts to dim.

    Flickers of tourment seen,
    whispers, at moments, meet.
    Silence grows through the void,
    violence flows to the noise.

    Rain pours into darkness,
    pain soars up to sadness.
    Vain spores of near madness,
    stain form of dear blackness.

    Reflections glint by eyes,
    perceptions glimpse at light.
    Hope strikes the fragile hearts,
    glows ignite blinding awe.

    As folk calmly shiver,
    ashes soak in fire.
    Life-giving ingredient,
    lights even dark visions.

    After the gleaming sun
    pierces through the night sky.
    The lost travellers leave,
    with the glimmer of love.

  5. #265

    a poem © 2002 by me, haha.

    so blue
    you are me
    see how i feel
    steal away this time

    so gray
    away from
    some kind of touch
    such things make you cry

    so black
    back aside
    hiding from light
    slightest sense of shock

    so red
    head of rage
    caged obsession
    regression too late

    so jade
    fade to lust
    trust in nothing
    bring yourself to me

    so peach
    reach to this
    kiss waiting here,
    peer inside my mind

    so plum
    strum the thought
    caught inside this
    kiss we shared as one

    so gold
    fold the gray
    stay here with me
    be this shade i see



    edit - fixed up the rhyme scheme a little.
    Last edited by theonlyguyever; 08-06-03 at 02:15 PM.

  6. #266
    Originally posted by wesmorris
    I wrote something basically pornographic once, but I think it has value... should I post it? it's really really really gross....
    YES!

  7. #267
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    What's that Floating Face Down in Pollluted Creeks?

    Faggots, fuckheads and freaks,
    Some of them are geeks,
    They smell of garlic and leeks,
    The phone rings, but no one speaks.

    Those freaks, faggots and fuckheads,
    Imagine them in and out of so many beds,
    All wearing their brand new Keds,
    Screwing with everyone's heads.

    Fuckheads, freaks and faggots,
    Stoned, but not with agates,
    All men are nothing more than stinking maggots,
    Cut off the dog's tail so he can't wag it.

    Those faggots, fuckheads and freaks,
    Make a mockery of Goddesses Greek,
    For all women, the Patriarchy reeks,
    Until we drown them all in their polluted creeks.

    ~ Kristin Kerley, American Poet

  8. #268
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    something postmodern

    [asylum dreams]

    stars, wars
    get out
    of
    my sickened mind.

    receive, transfer
    from
    to space
    in my brain.

    thoughts, growls,
    neuroshouts
    give me help.

    visions, veins,
    blood
    on ace of spades.

    my teeth,
    they win,
    they eat my skin.

    alarm,
    it rings,
    my corpse is seen.

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    some more from my +tWistED_INsanity+ series

    hey you stranger walking,
    see me by your feet lying.
    this is genocide!
    my brain cells – they are leaving,
    leaving me alone – crying.

    didn’t help me ambulance, didn’t LSD,
    they left me on the street – dying,
    looking at my mind – dancing.

    give me a hug and punch me hard,
    lick my naked lips,
    turn me on to hundred volts,
    see my eyes twitching
    Last edited by Avatar; 08-11-03 at 07:43 AM.

  10. #270
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    is there a different thread for happy poems
    i think im in the wrong place for happy poems

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    Here's a happy one...in a deep sort of way.

    Life must have a rhythm, life must have a beat
    Life must have a rhythm, life must have a beat
    Life must have a rhythm, life must have a beat.

    There’s a pattern to everything,
    But life seems like chaos all too often.

    What is beautiful about life is,
    Not all things need to know the pattern to be alive.

    The rhythm is always there,
    Not everything needs to know.

    But when I felt the rhythm,
    I was at peace.

    Then I felt the chaos,
    I was upset.

    But with both extremes in perspective,
    Life is beautiful.

    Regardless of the current mess,
    I was blessed to find my own rhythm.

  12. #272
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    lately late at nights I try to think like an insane person would
    just exploring my mind, poems are a sort of a byproduct


    take or not – pill on my table,
    poison or not I know not.

    pretty thing, tasty thing,
    tell me your flavor,
    are you yummy or are you yucky,
    or maybe taste like carrot?

    hey look!
    the dock is coming,
    but my legs are hidden under a pillow.

    there’s a knife fixed - in my toes,
    sick need fun - I want juice.
    blood on my cheeks, blood on my veins
    I like red!

    red is the colour I like,
    peek through my fingers infront of my face.
    up and down - the rainbow,
    I run through my favourite – red!
    Last edited by Avatar; 08-11-03 at 07:54 AM.

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    story within a poem

    Little boy blue

    Trained at an early age
    Making up for lost time in a moments rage
    He breaks not a sweat upon hells open ground
    And he was no where to be found

    …and so they try and break him

    Disappearing late one evening frost
    Along with a mothers loving cost

    Separating two silver boys at an early age
    Oh what can evil be devising at this stage?

    His name belongs to a demons line
    So trained is he at swordsmanship so refined
    Not one drop of devils blood around
    And he makes his way upon that open ground
    Upon hells open fiery lounge

    Stimulating his technique, refining his physique
    His name is unknown but there is no mystique

    To show the demons among his race
    Imagining not a moments fright to erase

    Cocky and self assured he be
    All the hells monsters have let him be

    To a god in the name of blasphemy so powerful
    He was serving and lies so full

    Side by side with minions simply doomed
    Tolerating presence that none could fathom
    Treading on hells most foul ground
    They make way for the demon whose blood
    Could not be found

    ....Still they try and break him

    His face a mask of sin
    And beauteous silver metal despair
    An unquestionable lair

    No longer a boy so blue
    Or so they thought him as was his due

    Has spent his years refining
    To find a way back home
    Has he heard his maker designing
    To break the barrier of hells dome?

    One day returning to get back home
    Honed in the art of fighting
    His blue eyes alighting

    Hybrids and Cerrus scorn this dark knight
    Slowly burning in their hatred blight

    ....They were not the first to try and break him

    A delivered man unto the worlds throes
    And those who hear his name no longer know
    The boy with silver gilded hair,
    Slicked back against his adversaries and foes
    In a realm of demons that do not dare

    To whisper his name in the darkness
    Of hells open brackish ground
    Not one soulless creature makes a sound

    As he walks into the black light of day
    To make one soul pay

    Eyes white heat blue in that back drop
    Armored heavily against the strain of his job
    And no one dares to make whispers

    On hells open fiery ground
    His new name in the birth of a shroud
    Humans blood replaced a boy so blue
    His mother never had a clue

    .....and still they try and break him
    ------------------------------------------------------
    by Marigny (me)

  14. #274

    Talking

    tell me why
    i can feel no emotion in my
    life
    and could i
    decide if i should live or should i die?
    because you hold my life
    in your hands
    easily blown away
    like sand
    looking up
    i find the sky has stopped
    in its blue
    could it be true?
    that my time has come for me to dissolve
    into nothing new?
    as you flip the pages of my mind
    you see its empty
    you cannot find
    me
    im lost
    even when we're in the same room
    i am lost
    to you
    as i stare out into nothing at the window
    i try to figure out when this'll all make sense
    please tell me

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    dcast
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    Among the waves of darkest sea
    there is a rock
    shattered like glass thrown on steel
    carved with signs of age and tears.

    On top of it
    still as frozen blood
    rests a tomb
    black as raven’s wing.

    The door is trembling in hysteric wind,
    sounding like a woman’s scream:
    “let go, let go my only dream!”

    As if selling all what’s dear
    a key of coffin buried deep
    still holding living sweat
    it stands firm in front of raging sea.

    Shrieking, squeaking, pleading, begging
    for a bird or for a sound
    that could wake the deadly sleep.

    Her I want among the living,
    closing me behind her steps,
    closing be it after death
    or endless nightmare tearing flesh.

    © 2003 Avatar

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    Mr Hakman.

    Much respect.

  19. #279
    Inside this darkness;
    thick as water;
    I am lost now;
    thick as blood.
    Inside this coffin;
    hard as metal;
    I am pounding;
    hard as your heart.
    This was the answer;
    frail as beauty;
    this was the future;
    frail as clay.
    Now all is broken;
    gone as tommorow;
    now all is shattered;
    gone as my heart.

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    sleeping on my pills
    can't be still,
    can't feel real.

    walking with a parachute
    can't find wind,
    where are my wings?

    every day on the street
    I lift rocks, fall into cracks
    only taxes, heat and dust!

    make me fall up the sky
    with the lights with the lights
    our city is so bright at nights.

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