A Poem Thread

Discussion in 'Art & Culture' started by Angelus, Nov 9, 2002.

  1. Mr.Jack4WAR Hating the Hated Registered Senior Member

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    no i just made it when me n my gurlfirned broke up...shes worthless to me and a whore...and a whore dis-respects their bodies... and the spec resembles the amount of actually love i have for her... and the dirt, well shes dirt to me
     
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  3. Avatar smoking revolver Valued Senior Member

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    You're a disgusting person.
     
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  5. Sauce We're Living To Die Registered Senior Member

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    Ya, I understood most of it, just wondering if it was you or a friend. And if the girl was a g/f, or a girl you WANTED to be your g/f. I understood the spec and dirt part.
     
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  7. Dreamwalker Whatever Valued Senior Member

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    Jack's of course.
     
  8. Sauce We're Living To Die Registered Senior Member

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    How is he a disgusting person? Considering you don't know the situation, and no matter what, when someone dumps you, your not going to feel happy about it. And he didn't do anything to physically hurt someone, he wrote a poem, to express how he felt and got it off his chest. So could you please remind us how he's a disgusting person
     
  9. Mr.Jack4WAR Hating the Hated Registered Senior Member

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    well wen u date a gurl for 2 years then the month yall break up and u find out she gave another guy head and already has had 2 boy friends....u wud be pissed to so please be quite

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  10. Avatar smoking revolver Valued Senior Member

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    Everyone is a free person and with full rights to "dump" anyone at any time.
    A human being is not a property. And his foul language talking so about another human just shows how primitive he is.

    p.s. And of course I wouldn't be pissed. Never have.
     
  11. Sauce We're Living To Die Registered Senior Member

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    Well, if you've ever had someone dump you, didn't you feel sad? If not, you may not have feelings, and you should probably get that checked. And we have free speech, he's entitled to tell what he thinks about someone, just like your entitled to tell him that you think he's wrong and a disgusting person. Though we all ALSO have the right to free thought, most don't use it, and would rather have free speech.
     
  12. Avatar smoking revolver Valued Senior Member

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    sneers // This topic has gotten out of hand. Why not a small poem.
    One with a scientific theme, this is still Sciforums.

    [Permian extinction -2]

    a death to me,
    a death to you,
    a death to everything in sea
    and on land, in the skies above.

    a death to the human kind,
    a death to bisons and butterflies,
    a death to fish and trees.

    history! it repeats,
    95% of life is gone again,
    everything, but satellites orbiting the earth,
    they remain there as fossils of humankind.
     
  13. Sauce We're Living To Die Registered Senior Member

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    Life is nothing, but what you make it
    You can let it simmer, or you can take it
    Create it, into something far beyond the mind's imagination
    Far beyond its own creation

    Far beyond fact and fiction
    Far beyond the cost of tuition
    Create it until there is no life itself
    Keep going until life is just another book, lying on the shelf

    You are waiting, to be known as more then great
    But your options are already set upon your plate
    Choose one choice, not knowing the greatness you could pocess
    Choose another, and be greater then great, at its best

    lol, i just made that up right now. Copyrighted 2005 by Sauce
     
  14. Avatar smoking revolver Valued Senior Member

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    Here I made something up too. For the company.
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    there won't be another night
    no, no,
    not another -
    the knight has been eaten
    and the princess is dead,
    the dragons laugh blue smoke,
    no, no other night.

    a new world has been created
    from the ashes of the Sun
    and the breath of the dragons now free;
    it all shines in immortal light,
    and nobody will cry again,
    not another night.
     
  15. Sauce We're Living To Die Registered Senior Member

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    your pretty good avatar. i liked it.
     
  16. Avatar smoking revolver Valued Senior Member

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    one more. about some mythological female creatures. // just created
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    wine and roses
    we serve them
    on kisses

    it is given!
    drink! please, taste!
    take it in yourselves

    don't ask,
    don't doubt our reasons to poison
    to death!
    take them into yourselves

    little white flowers
    shall be given to your graves
    and what little bones
    shall be left from the feast

    drink! take all the kisses
    and all the pain -
    your souls yearn for release,
    take these flowers, please..
    now
     
  17. Avatar smoking revolver Valued Senior Member

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    and one more, for the new thread tradition of insta-writing
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    My little sister Death,
    when she comes - everybody runs,
    when she sings every body screams,
    my little sister, my little sister cries.

    Only dolls play in her pale little arms,
    only corpses,
    only those who had ran,
    my little sister Death, she cries -
    I lower my eyes.

    I hold her hand in my chest,
    let her feel my heart, it burns for her,
    just for her, my little sister with pale arms:
    "don't cry, a brothers' kiss for you,
    my sister, my sister, my heart for you."
     
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  18. Mr.Jack4WAR Hating the Hated Registered Senior Member

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    i like sauce's

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    wait how come all these poems r expressing life?? haha i like them thoo
     
  19. Mr.Jack4WAR Hating the Hated Registered Senior Member

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    haha....
    she took me by the hand and squinted to see the truth
    the love she knew was only to be torn
    to be hated afterwards is the chilling thought of misery
    not to dread on self pity... but to encourage to move on...
    sympathy of ur self means is a lowering motivator
    let things go , dont hold back
    express your true love, let go of ur silly-teenage loves
    if trueness is torn, dont rue..
    for only the grey matters will worsen...
    Let the love go if its not meant..
    AND move on..
    once again, no self pity
    copyright 2005? i guess? haha .. never copywrited sumthin(pride)
     
  20. Go Down Moses Registered Senior Member

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    No offense, Jack4War, but yours is some of the worst "poetry" I've ever tried to read.
     
  21. sargentlard Save the whales motherfucker Valued Senior Member

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    *claps*...bravo...I am impressed.

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  22. Mr.Jack4WAR Hating the Hated Registered Senior Member

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    sargant, i was joking around... u think those silly rhymes were serious?? haha no no no my friend. just a fun thing
     
  23. Mr.Jack4WAR Hating the Hated Registered Senior Member

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    o wait, i guess those were serious??? nvm i suck then

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