A Poem Thread

Discussion in 'Art & Culture' started by Angelus, Nov 9, 2002.

  1. draqon Banned Banned

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    I never had a friend
    I never had a life
    in all the things I saw
    I saw reflection of wrong and right

    Once came upon a rock
    The rock stared back at me
    In everlasting eternity I stood there
    watching calmly as eternity passed through me

    I never had a friend
    I never had a life
    In all the things I never seen
    I lay inside a coffin tight
     
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  3. Chatha big brown was screwed up Registered Senior Member

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    Thanks for the pleasures
    Thanks for knowing me
    Thanks for another day
    Thanks for another time
    Thanks for seeing me through when I laid
    See you in Australia
    See you in Badgdad
    See you everywhere
    Thanks for the good times
    Thanks for being my friend


    *dedicated to everybody to ever have a friend*
     
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  5. Chatha big brown was screwed up Registered Senior Member

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    You have a friend

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  7. draqon Banned Banned

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    well yeah.
     
  8. Chatha big brown was screwed up Registered Senior Member

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    very nice poem
     
  9. draqon Banned Banned

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    ...is this the part were I say, thank you and your poem was nice too?:bugeye:
     
  10. Chatha big brown was screwed up Registered Senior Member

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    I haven't written a poem in forever, but thanks
     
  11. Meanwhile Banned Banned

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    I have haven't

    I have not

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    a poem

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    inforever

    forever

    ever

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    But




    but thanks
     
  12. draqon Banned Banned

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    Meanwhile
    came while we were gone
    He took the knife and stabbed the string of friendship and begone
     
  13. Meanwhile Banned Banned

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    Uh, is this the part where I'm suppose to suspect of an insinuation on your part for a faux-pas on my part, and feel all embarrassed and stuff? And what exactly are you insinuating at, Draqon? that I killed a fledging friendship, your fledging friendship for Catha, and that then I betook myself away? Or that friendship is like a string and that I stabbed at a string, a string of friendship, which sounds totally self-defeating. But then again, if your friendships are dependent on insinuating remarks from others... then, well, what can be more self-defeating???
     
  14. shakushinnen Registered Senior Member

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    The Death of St. Stephan

    Stone moon, stone eyes, sees my fears.
    Stone pit, stone sand drinks my tears.

    Stone age stone heads pelting rocks.
    Stones cast, stone blind, without thought.

    Stone hard stones rain down in red.
    Stones pound stone ground to my head.

    Stone cold dread grips my soul.

    Stone deaf god hear my plea.
    Stones cry, stone man kiss my cheek.
     
  15. draqon Banned Banned

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    Here's a compilation by me (draqon), Nickelodeon, PsychoticEpisode, and Utopmk. Its from cesspool's thread of sentence continuation.


    Title: Puppets without oxygen


    Humans without oxygen.

    Which proves impossible.

    So they died. No-one cried. I lied.

    really they all just died, in pride

    lungs fried,nowhere to hide

    than when the dust settled and bodies lay dead,

    their souls arose to meet the relatives in heaven that back to Earth have fled

    but heaven was empty.

    A vacant lot of darkness.

    No clouds, no harps, no angles, no Goddnesses.

    But where were they?

    Up stepped to the pedistal of darkness the angel arose

    their minds' fear of chaos with every second grows

    He said 'relax for a minute my innocent friend

    and I'll show you a preview of the upcoming end'

    coalescent into an infinity

    yet another beginning of tranquil serenity

    As the end was the beginning

    they had no doubts to worry

    night covered their eyes

    and that was the end of the story

    Until the universe formed into

    an everlasting cyan ocean

    which whispered softly and silently

    in waves' eternal motion

    and it belonged to none other than the creator

    who giggled and jiggled

    because at the same time he was the dictator

    controlling humans like puppets

    sooner or later

    meant that if He made more women and men

    that He would get to kill them

    time and again and again

    until human blood covered the Earth with red ocean stain

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  16. shakushinnen Registered Senior Member

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    Hey Dragon,
    That's good stuff. I love the cadence.
    John
     
  17. Avatar smoking revolver Valued Senior Member

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    I'm in a room:
    four walls are white,
    the others - full of stars.

    I stretch out my arms
    and am lost among a confusion of things -
    little, unimportant, real:
    a toothbrush, a teapot, a shoe, a book, photo of a friend;
    I am among them -
    floating, unimportant, real.

    A parade, a flow, a soul,
    we are flowing in white light full of stars;
    a parade!, you see a parade!

    I stretch out my arms
    and give them to stars -
    two birds fly back to my heart!

    Two white and feasting on my arms,
    two birds singing - life!;
    and I have become a sun, a star(!)
    in white light.

    Two birds with my blood dripping down their coats,
    two birds singing - life!,
    and I have become life -
    floating, unimportant, conscious and real.
     
  18. darksidZz Valued Senior Member

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    Carmen, that name that whisphers on the edge of reality. Carmen, that sense of being around her that makes my heart fly. She smiles at me gracefully, with that glimmer of thought in her eyes. Carmen my darling come back, don't let me go from your life for wanting to be closer. Nightmares of moving on, dreams of loosing someone I care for... Carmen I miss you, I wish it was like when we first met, your voice saying "hi" and hand touching my arm.

    I'm not sure where the winds take me, but I'll always feel a breeze from your path in my life.
     
  19. jessiej920 Shake them dice and roll 'em Valued Senior Member

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    Let the bitter ones die alone
    Do not feel sorry for them, in their angry plight
    Cold hearts, cold hands, cold words of bone
    I say let the bitter ones die alone

    Let the bitter ones die alone
    When warmth of love does fade from sight
    Do not hold on, hold tight, hold strong,
    Not to dark statues made from stone
    I say let the bitter ones die alone

    Let me not repeat to you
    Give rest, seek flight, from this pitfiul home
    And let the bitter ones die alone
     
  20. Chatha big brown was screwed up Registered Senior Member

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    "If you love somebody, you've got to trust them, there's no other way"- American Actor Robert deniro. Casino
     
  21. nicholas1M7 Banned Banned

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    Great poem.

    A regular Robert Frost.
     
  22. sargentlard Save the whales motherfucker Valued Senior Member

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    Wrote this for my parents..they'll never see it though.

    Uncarved


    I remained a stone uncarved
    a mere vision waiting to be
    lost to see the world at large
    untill my father's eyes were chiseled in me

    I carved within me my mother's feet
    so I should stand strong on the dreary roads
    emboldened by my father's heart
    that I may never fear letting go

    I felt the breeze brush my face
    wrapped my in my mother's skin
    her blood rivered through my veins
    so that I may feel the love of my kin

    Etched upon me their lines of wisdom
    chasms weaving with their echoes of age
    my lips gashed with sorrowed whispers
    in their pain resting the words of a sage.

    I am my mother's mind
    but warriors engaged, never to think the same
    I am my father's thighs
    though I carry burdens of a different name.

    I am no more a god's creation
    than a child born able and free
    For I remained a stoned uncarved
    and then my father's eyes were chisled in me.
     
  23. Sci-Phenomena Reality is in the Minds Eye Registered Senior Member

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    it has a nice ring
     

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