Flammable Words! (spoken word poetry)

Discussion in 'Art & Culture' started by Guvamint, Nov 2, 2006.

  1. Guvamint Registered Member

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    -Inspired by My Burning Desire this is proof that water turns into fire!

    Poetry broken down in to rhymes, emotions defined, Words turn flammable,

    All elements combined! (manipulating the metaphysics)

    The mind that allows me to think.

    The feather consuming the ink, not shallow are the deep scriptures that allow me to sink.

    -Shhhhh!!

    Listen to my intuition..

    Risen to my ambition..

    I do not contend. However, in the process of concurring dreams and visions I automatically murder competition.

    Selected negativity must be ejected and neglected,

    Elected positivity resurrected and my abilities became perfected!

    -False images projected; all from the minds of the cowards who get lifted or injected to avoid stressful conflicts and feel protected. You are not respected!

    My conclusions are not subjective, Intangible facts and not perspective!

    Logically, I am a Self governed civilian, concluded my own religion, opinion, and philosophy, too brilliant. Avoid governmental punishment, and you wonder why they call me The GUVAMINT!!

    -No flaw, I am my own rule, my own theory, my own god and my own law. Lines quite sentimental, refuse to be enslaved to a beat, therefore; silence is my only instrumental!

    Use the mind to write, use the mind to fight, third eye sees all for those born without sight. Scribe rapidly and you might find a spark in the sentence, observe your atmosphere and sharpen your senses. Two platinum bars of mine are worth more then priceless necklace. Perhaps too eliptical, scientist see that i spit fire but yet remain skeptical! All energy into the flows, very electrical. The words are over zealous, similies so sick that metaphors get jealous! Am I god? ofcoarse the question is incredible and perhaps hypothetical!!

    -My Tangible evidence strictly detained.

    My Annual eminence shifty remained,

    By Actual excellence, sickly insane!

    Factual elegance strictly in range!

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    These are just thoughts that I rhymed in an altered state of mind (NO DRUGS INVOLVED ) - it is what it is!

    Acknowledging the users and their strong intellect on the sight; I just want an opinion. Does this speak to you or is it just an intellectual property that makes no sence?
     
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  3. draqon Banned Banned

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    altered state of mind

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    The electric night rolled in.

    Like fog.

    Like an opium dream.

    Screaming euphoria in our ears,
    and I was walking madness.

    Girls walked gently with bottles of
    Whiskey.
    The men in blue turned in their badges
    and I shouted.

    I yelled.

    I stomped my feet.

    I killed all sanity.

    Dressed in my sheets of black velvet.
    Shouting madness,
    Letting it all shoot out.
    Watching the cars stroll by on the
    boulevard.

    And you came along
    made my world an asylum
    and I kissed you.

    stole your dreams

    handcuffed your soul to mine
    and threw away the stinking key.

    You know where I'm coming from.

    (The Altered Mind no.9, July 1991: http://images.google.com/imgres?img...mages?q=altered+mind&svnum=10&hl=en&lr=&sa=N)
     
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