This has been done before, but not very well. Please try to keep the continuity. Try not to end the story such as: "all of a sudden, the universe ends". Try to avoid dream sequences to change the direction. Once upon a time there was a small peaceful village on the planet Aquador. The planet itself was similar to the size of Earth, but it was quite uninhabitable. But it was not that bad. It was safe enough for an artificial habitat colony to be set up on the surface. The oxygen within the habitat remained fresh, and the village was bright and simple. The Aquador village was a resting stop for intergalactic travelers. Humans have colonized many parts of the galaxy, but have yet to find any form of alien life beyond bacteria. Weary travelers would stop off at Aquador only when traveling between the great colonies of Murof and Resu. Calen was a native of Aquador working at a diner. He longed for great adventure. . .
As Calen prepared for the end of his workday he began planning his soon-to-be excursion into the outer territories. He knew there might be some danger but could hardly understand just how much. Afterall Calen has been raised in the Aquador village since a small child, he was born there. As the resting stop for most, if not all the intergalatic travelers in the nearby region his life was a busy one, constantly keeping up-to-date on new foods, along with varying drinks from the outer planets. After work has finished he grabbed his gym bag from which he pulled his holotransfer grid display. It shone brightly with a redish yellow light, then appeared the news for that day. Appearantly the meteorer had impacted around 1100 hours, just around the time he'd gotten back from his lunch. Calen thought to himself "Why, why did they not tell me, I'm trying to learn more about off-world debris an this is my chance". He thought back to the institute, how his friends were so busy with studies.
A huge meteor came along and crashed into Aquador blowing it to pieces upon impact, taking everyone and everything with it. It was a sad day. The END new: Diary of a 25yr old virgin by Sderenzi take it away sderenzi
That wasn't precisely good, why ruin his story? Just to get back at me for making that annoying post you were so angry with? LOL You're an odd one Theory, I find you are very opinionated. I luV u!
stop saying you love me Please Register or Log in to view the hidden image! I have decided I prefer the carmen v sderenzi soap afterall is all. Planet Aquador is pants.
Ok, I don't luV u! I hate you! How's that? Anyway I guess the planet Aquador isn't the exciting, maybe I could've written Carmen into it somewhere?
Once upon a time there was a young Prince called Sderenzi who was madly in love with peasant girl and single mom of two Carmen. Sderenzi first saw Carmen when she applied to be a Royal servant at the Royal palace. He noticed how her bosoms heaved when she inhaled, two abnormally large pillows of pale loveliness nesting precariously in an ill fitted bra that was partially revealed by her low buttoned blouse. He could barely draw breath as he secretly admired her lovely round bottom. When carmen bent over to dust the Royal slippers he would catch a glimpse of her upper inner thighs, legs slightly parted, skirt split to just below her womanly warm place. He would dream of the day when........... But alas he was a virgin and did not know if Carmen returned his admiration or desired him as he did her.
This always happens with 'finish my story' type threads. Somebody just comes along and finishes the damn' thing.
