Do you people think this is corny?

Discussion in 'Free Thoughts' started by ammie317, Apr 6, 2003.

  1. ammie317 Registered Member

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    The Final Draft
    You told me lies,deceived me and betraied me
    You talked of things you knew would never be
    You turned your back on me when I needed you the most
    Now with nothing better to do, than to boast
    You can't make up your mind
    Your spinning me in circles, so my way I can't find
    I'm not giving up,simply changing my ways
    Now without you I've learned there are better days
    Don't try to entervein,I'm going to live
    So please don't ask because to you I have nothing left to give By:America Smith
     
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  3. wet1 Wanderer Registered Senior Member

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    To be honest, I wouldn't bother, Amiee. Make peace with yourself and move on. In the long run it is you that has to do that, not him. You are the one that has to lay it to rest. He already has moved on.
     
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  5. TruthSeeker Fancy Virtual Reality Monkey Valued Senior Member

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    That's nice. It is not easy to always rhime like that...

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    Happy to see you are forgetting that guy... he doesn't seem to deserve being loved anyways.

    I agree with wet1...

    EDIT: Sorry. Shouldn't say he doesn't deserve to be loved. Life without love is not worth living. He is just too immature to go into a real relationship, that's all. (Like somebody else I know...

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  7. ammie317 Registered Member

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    truthseeker,
    when you 've been writing for four years the words just come to you some times they rhymand sometimes they don't but thank you.
     
  8. TruthSeeker Fancy Virtual Reality Monkey Valued Senior Member

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    I always try to rhime... It is not easy...

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  9. sargentlard Save the whales motherfucker Valued Senior Member

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    that sounds like a Linkin Park song...but seriously: you need to forget about him

    The problem - that's easier said than done and will take time and effort on your part.



    The solution - sadly

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    there really isn't one except you respect yourself and show that you can move on and also writing your feelings down might help...never helped me....but a lot of people say it helps.


    If you ever do get over it - go bar hopping and get drunk and realize that there are 3 billion more men out there for 1 of you....actually doing that might constitutes as solution itself....but whatever works for ya babe

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  10. TruthSeeker Fancy Virtual Reality Monkey Valued Senior Member

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    3 billion? I don't think so. It highly depends on her age and on the language spoken (a chinese that only speaks chinese, might be too hard, eh?

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    ). So it goes down to some millions only...
     
  11. sargentlard Save the whales motherfucker Valued Senior Member

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    Ok so a few million to 1, still pretty good odds by my standard...but a lot more gets factored in and it comes down to a thousand and then to a few hundred but hey few hunderd to 1 still good so America hang in there and forget the cheating former hubby and go out and find a new face smooching um..uh..buddy (ok it rhymes if you stretch or squeeze some words)

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  12. ammie317 Registered Member

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    you are crazy ok! but I got a laugh out it. wow the people you can run into on the net. you're great uh, thanx
    Ammie
     

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