hi guys/galls my first thread here........and

I thought I'd post a poem I wrote in response to someone who asked why the meaning of life was so ellusive.

If you like it let me know.

If you don't...suck eggs:D

Eternity

A song that will never be sung,
****so melodic so beautiful the heart does sigh
A poem that will never be posed,
****so rhythmic so profound
A word that will never be spoken
****so full of meaning that it makes you cry
An answer so wanted
****but never to be found



A feeling that will never be felt
****so strong so intense
A love that will never come to you
****so sweet so full
A future that is always there
****an adventure so immense
A curiosity that is never quenched
****A heat that will never cool


There is no better way
****as none have shown
How to keep our noses to the wind
****and our eyes beyond
There is always something
****that can never be done
A game that can only be played
****and never lost or won

Hmm, sweet if I may say. You use the patterns quite well, especially during the first two 'paragraphs' (correct me here, I have a lack of art terms).
I just wonder why you didn't put this in the Sticky: Poem Thread.

after I posted it I realised that a collection was happening I sent the moderator a pm to see if he wanted to shift it.

My mistake.......

Well, you're not alone.
The first time I realized bout the Sticky threads, I've posted 200+ posts....

Why did you correct your self in the thread title when you could have just fixed the typo?