Shallow Never seeing, Never being Never knowing, Never growing Always the same, Cannot be blamed Taking kindness for granted Abusing the power of beauty Completely oblivious to whats going on Only you exist in your world Condemed to be unhappy But still not understanding Selfish is the path you take Underestimating the competition Losing before its begun Focusing on self-image Look how superficial your life has become Should have made friends instead of copies No one is there in your times of need Is anyone good enough? Does anyone measure-up? Destined to be alone Unable to comprehend the error of your ways S.G. Not my best work, but I decided to post it anyways
Not as good as the rest, I think it needs a bit more - depth - but the alliteration here: Never seeing, Never being Never knowing, Never growing Is utterly and completely fucking brilliant!
ok heres links to my others that are posted. http://www.sciforums.com/t9326/s/thread.html http://www.sciforums.com/t9219/s/thread.html http://www.sciforums.com/t9178/s/thread.html http://www.sciforums.com/t9092/s/thread.html There ya go.
Cool, dude! You rule! Mind if I write a melody? I think it will sound great with some heavy metal riffs.
That's a matter of opinion, check out the links to the others in an above post and decide for yourself.