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Non-Logical-Idea-Guy
10-17-07, 02:39 PM
No matter how it ends
No matter how it starts
Forget about your house of cards
Better join the best fitting line


Discuss, criticise, mock. This was my homework : Come up with a poem with A A B B syllable pattern and make it slightly meaningful.

I stole a line off the new radiohead album lolz :D

cosmictraveler
10-17-07, 02:42 PM
you want our views
no matter what they are
remember that answers come
and go afar.

shorty_37
10-17-07, 02:43 PM
Homework for what grade?

My son is in grade 6 and has come up with better poems.

shichimenshyo
10-17-07, 02:43 PM
Ouch