My poem

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  1. Non-Logical-Idea-Guy

    Non-Logical-Idea-Guy Fat people can't smile. Registered Senior Member

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    No matter how it ends
    No matter how it starts
    Forget about your house of cards
    Better join the best fitting line


    Discuss, criticise, mock. This was my homework : Come up with a poem with A A B B syllable pattern and make it slightly meaningful.

    I stole a line off the new radiohead album lolz

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    Non-Logical-Idea-Guy, Oct 17, 2007
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  3. cosmictraveler

    cosmictraveler Be kind to yourself always. Valued Senior Member

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    you want our views
    no matter what they are
    remember that answers come
    and go afar.
     
    cosmictraveler, Oct 17, 2007
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  5. shorty_37

    shorty_37 Go! Canada Go! Registered Senior Member

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    Homework for what grade?

    My son is in grade 6 and has come up with better poems.
     
    shorty_37, Oct 17, 2007
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  7. shichimenshyo

    shichimenshyo Caught in the machine Registered Senior Member

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    Ouch
     
    shichimenshyo, Oct 17, 2007
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